All Comments on 'Two Moms, A Tale - Final For Now'

by raraewriter

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bucco40bucco409 months ago

Too big a time jump. You need to explain how the two moms became agents.

1thaiguy1thaiguy9 months ago

The lead up was good but you tried to hard to end it. I assume you got bored and just wanted ulit done

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Very good story. Please continue it as you are able. Thank you.

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Thanks for your patience. Two Moms, A Tale is about to come to a conclusion. Concentrating on finalizing Two Moms and changing the next chapters to reflect a twist in plot line(s). Current family dynamics do not lend themselves to new twists. I'll close out Two Moms by withdra...