All Comments on 'Two Moms'

Great story! I hope you have a follow up chapter to share.

I really enjoyed the story. I thought each of the pairings was super hot, be it past, present, or virtual. I was a nanny all through my twenties so some of this seems familiar and it’s a huge turn on. Not every mom group has hook ups, but in my experience it’s a non-zero number. The only thing that took me out of it was how the kids kind of disappeared. “Put them in the playpen so you can have look sex” is a sharp turn from the pretty solid parent vibes you set up. I know that’s not the focus, and I still really liked the story, but it was just something that stuck out to me.

Absolutely brilliant story. Are you thinking about expanding it by having the two couples meet, swapping, foursome etc?

I liked this story a lot. Keep them coming.

Leave the husbands out of it

That is a great story! I haven’t read many better. Thank you and I hope to see more from you.

Wow, that was way hotter than I expected - well done! I loved the slow build, and the story-within-a-story structure. Now I'm imagining what might happen in a sequel.

Amazing story! This was one of my favs . I hope you write more about them

If there were any more stars to give than five, then I will give it! Phew!

Great. Need to do more

WOW,need a part 2!!

One of your best ever!

That was fantastic.

I loved this story so much. You are a fantastic writer with a brilliant imagination. I learned a lot about writing erotica from this. Thank you so much for sharing this.

Hi fantasy story well written couldn’t put it down just had to have a few wanks while reading it exactly looking forward to the other stories. Thank you xx

I am sure there is a sequel in this, fantastic story thankyou xx

Just a great story l hope there is going to be a follow up of the 2 mums

Enjoyed this quite a bit. Well done without being crude. Long but held my interest.

One he'll of a story. Keep them coming.

Great story, I loved it and was so wet imagining Molly and Lisa together.

Anticipation and build up combine to make this a wonderful a bedtime read.