All Comments on 'Two-some, Three-some, Boat-some Ch. 02'

by MrMsScrewloose

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Definitely written by "screwloose."

Find another hobby.

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 11 years ago
Repeat as a sequel

Pity this PoV was NOT the original (and only) accounting! There is very little new in this second chapter, but the perspective is better...at least in my opinion! There is more reluctance expressed, but it seems 'pro forma' given Sweetie's past history and current excitement.

I especially liked her final statement!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
loved it

great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
1*

illiterate cuck shit.

erotikoserotikosabout 2 years ago

Out. Fucking.STANDNG!! Loved the hot sex, the exquisite storytelling and the excellent writing. Good job, well done! Five stars are not nearly enough, wish I could give you a well-deserved perfect “10” instead!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

piece of shit

01JETMECH01JETMECHabout 1 year ago

I really enjoyed the perspective of both sides, please write more.

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