by MrMsScrewloose
Out. Fucking.STANDNG!! Loved the hot sex, the exquisite storytelling and the excellent writing. Good job, well done! Five stars are not nearly enough, wish I could give you a well-deserved perfect “10” instead!
Pity this PoV was NOT the original (and only) accounting! There is very little new in this second chapter, but the perspective is better...at least in my opinion! There is more reluctance expressed, but it seems 'pro forma' given Sweetie's past history and current excitement.
I especially liked her final statement!