All Comments on 'Two Southern Gentlemen Ch. 01'

Too short, it doesn't even really get into the story.

You write well and set the scene and character. It is short, I’m looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Ok I’m all southerned up now, let’s get this party started. I’m enjoying this but kinda need some “meat” to grab onto.

Thanks for reading! I should have added a disclaimer that the first two chapters introduce the two main characters and don't have any sex, but pretty much every chapter after that should be more "entertaining". The second chapter has been submitted and will hopefully be posted soon!