All Comments on 'Two Thighs Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Ditto previous comments. A reasonable plot devastated by sloppiness.

Ditto previous comments. A reasonable plot devastated by sloppiness.

jennyphiljennyphilalmost 5 years ago
More please?

Great storyline, let's hear how they do it?

Been there, done that, ourselves

DunkirkDunkirkalmost 5 years ago

Hope they swap. They can have an all nighter fucking the other spouse

WintergraspWintergraspalmost 2 years ago

Love the slow buildup in these stories

DessertmanDessertmanover 1 year ago

You need an editor, the story is spoilt by sloppy writing, the errors interrupt the flow.

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I have published one book, ghost-written a second, contributed to an anthology, and a number of profession-related articles. All were non-fiction. It is fun to write erotic stories. My hope is that readers enjoy reading my stories as much as I enjoy writing them.

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