All Comments on 'Two Widows Pt. 01'

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Taskmaster42aTaskmaster42aover 7 years ago
a good start

A good first chapter. Take your time in their training perhaps a trip to buy fetish attire including leather dresses , latex cat suits, costumes i.e. French Maid , slutty policewoman uniform , maybe some 50's housewife outfits.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
liked it

Good start hope there are more in this series..Spanking, and nipple clamps being used would eb great..

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Loving Dominant

I like the prospect that Rick will be generally beneficient and constructive in his mastery of these two, earning their devotion - strict and strong but bending them toward a good life.

gasissynoragasissynoraover 7 years ago
exciting

Looking for the next part

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Silly. Unrealistic. Almost juvinile

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
He met them where they are

Excellent story. These women, with years of stability and guidance suddenly taken away, were given back what they needed and desired and he met them where they were. Not doubt he will lead them where he wants to be over time, but he met their psychological needs first, which will encourage/allow them to follow. Dominance happens between the ears first. And to anon who thinks this is unrealistic: You are mistaken. TIH relationships often start just as abruptly and go much further when a good match is made.

gentleone58gentleone58over 7 years ago
Is There More To Come

These two women were in a place where they needed someone like Rick. It was very ironic that he had been assisting them since the passing of their husband's deaths and now he will help them in the way they truly need. I suspect that this will not be all punishment as he was very forceful but he did not try to break them. Hope there is more.

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