All Comments on 'Typical Night, or Maybe Not'

You had a good story going here , but lines like, "Her burning, wet, love canal surrounded his throbbing rod." belong in a romance novel. Tell it straight if you're going to tell it. Finally, what the hell is a cis-heterosexual?

But please refrain from flowery terms to describe fucking and no one outside of the LGBTQ+ community and college girls knows what the he’ll cis-heterosexuality is.

between a man and his own wife! Without any third, fourth, or more parties involved. What a novel concept. Thanks NJ

that this tale is a testimony to their love by her reserve lover, her husband being away on business? So passionate! So very sweet!

What has Friday to do with it or the three year old?

I had to look up cis-hetero. I don't give a rats ass if you're gay/lesbian, trans or whatever the fuck people identify with, you could be a purple slut martian from outta space for all I care. But I am so tired of the LBGTQ bullshit being jammed down our throats like they're the only ones that matter.

I also agree about the sex descriptions, if I wanted to read mills & boon I'd fucking read them.

Welcome to the LW madhouse!