by unilive
Sweetest chapter so far :-)
Their post-reunion-sex conversation was one ANY couple could've had after going through some sort of troubled times. Your portrayal of their relationship is getting better and better - and it wasn't in any way bad to start with!!
They talk of trust and devotion and undying love - still they aren’t honest enough to discuss the one topic they both know was deeply wrong and exceedingly hurtful, yet they each carelessly let it happen with little resistance. Two extremely weak and deeply flawed people that easily could’ve stayed true to their promises but simply, lustfully chose not to... Finding it so hard to care anymore but I’m really trying.
To Anonymous,
Bitter much are we? There are still 5 chapters to go. If you cannot understand the author's writing, then STOP reading! It's that simple. I think he is doing a DAMN FINE bang up job on writing it. Believe me, with this kind of story, YOU will get your "Come to Jesus" moment and they WILL discuss it. For now, and for the love of God Almighty, just ENJOY the sweet reunion!