All Comments on 'Unanticipated Lover Ch. 01'

Hot and a nice start to wonderful things. Looking forward to reading more of this story.

I really enjoyed this so far and am a little sad it ended so soon. I hope to see more in the near future!

Nice start. Pretty solid narration, and a great overall premise. Enjoying what I’m reading, though the dialogue felt a little clunky in parts. This might have something to do with the father coming across as a little immature and under developed as a character at times. Still enjoying it, and I have a suspicion that mom and son are up to some naughtiness of their own on that trip…

I hope part two is nearby. Wonderful, despite some grammar/typo problems.

Great start. Will the mother and son get together too? How convenient that are away for 2 weeks. 5 starz

Great, but needs to be finished.

Really enjoyed this! Like to hear more

And,,,?

So beautiful. The subconscious dream of many fathers and daughters.

The opposite of realistic. You have to be truly delusional to find this persiflage even remotely plausible.