All Comments on 'Unanticipated Lover Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

So Misty has been in love with her Daddy for years? Yet she fucked other men? Maybe girls too? That makes Misty a cheating slut. Not a loyal lover. Course, Daddy is cheating too. I'm not gonna be surprised if Mom is fucking Ben. I'm not interested in cheaters and sluts. This is just lust. Not love.

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikey7 months ago

LOVED IT! More please. 5 Stars.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Awesome read! Keep it up, looking forward to reading more about their week together. Maybe even tell about mom and Ben bringing the two couples together for a family fun time!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Please write more. After all, they have the rest of the two weeks that Ben and Ava are away, to fuck each other senceless. Too bad she wasn't a virgin, or is she?

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

This was hot, but it was still cheating on his wife. I think if it were reversed and his son was fucking his wife, how would he feel?

If it were me, I’d be devastated.

Bill S.

Jl4tJl4t7 months ago

I thought it was a great read. I want more. For what it's worth, this is fantasy, not real life. Please give three author a break. If it makes you uncomfortable or maybe it his a little close home, then don't read and move on.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Please write more. I love this story.

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I'm a man/husband/father who writes things. Under the Christian Brooks pen name I am an author of male POV erotica. I have one book in the process of being published and I plan on putting some drafts up on Literotica. Under other names I write Scifi and Fantasy.

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