All Comments on 'Unbelievable Pt. 10'

Wow best series I have read amazing

fine work, thank you ...

but dude it´s not a chapter it´s shy of a whole Book ... 90K Words :D

Brilliant roller coaster of a story well worth the read.

Honestly great work, great reading! Continuing to impress everytime. Keep up the excellent writing! Thank you

I've been waiting for this!

While I'm sad to see this tale come to an end... I have to say this will be one of my favorites of all time. I love most of your work and can't wait for the journeys they will take me on. Something about this one drew me in far more than most if not all others have. Thank you for taking the time to not only write such amazing stories but also publishing them here for poor people like me. I can't wait to see what new adventure await us as you write new or continue old tales for us to enjoy. Thanks for Sharing!

Thank you for a wonderful tale.

I hope to see more of your wonderful work

Loved the ending and the series overall. 5 stars. I'm easily paranoid, so when i saw the warning at the beginning and the mention of the boat in chapter 8, i was on edge worrying about whether or not that was janus's ex stalking her.

This is the best of your series. Outstanding all the way through! Thank you

You are something else. A great topic that few would touch, a great story, and this was a story that I couldn't read all at once. I'd taken many mini breaks to get through it. On the other hand, I can see a doctor looking at your brain after your death and mutter, "WTF" when all of these stories starts falling out. Thank you. Grouch6977

I really like how the series is able to connect with me and most likely everyone else. If I could I would give it 10 stars

Well done! Very difficult subject matter, handled exceptionally well. This could have gone all kinds of sideways, or into pure nonsense. Great job keeping the experimental procedure from being an unrealistic miracle cure. In the end m very enjoyable.

Well done!

Stephen King of Literotica.

Ten stars for a fascinating story

Great story line

Riveting drama

Good sex

Fun times too! Thank you

This has been a great story. Glad that you have shared it with us.

That was the best story

10 chapters, who knows how many pages and yet I was sad to see it end. Definitely had to be Soul's magnum opus. An incredibly well written story with great characters, interesting stories, and a sweet ending. 6 stars.

Thank you

Brandan is still a loudmouthed blowhard

I loved it. It was very well written all throughout, and ended very pleasantly. Admittedly I had issues in the first few chapters of the first part, but once again that was me, and not a reflection on the author. Very well done story, and I look forward to more new adventures!

It was perfect down to the last minute detail

Great story it’s a masterpiece I was hoping for a personality merger not a struggle but who knows that if the story continued they wouldn’t of merged with time anyway by just getting ask the childhood memories and mannerisms without the trauma the more he went to therapy. But you are truly a master with writing stories keep up the great work.

NGL, I've never read a story on Lit that I could honestly say that I skipped through most of of the sex in favor of the story. This was in magnificent. I hated almost every single character at one point or another, but felt sympathy for them all at the same time. I cried, I laughed, I felt scared witless...this story had me all over the place. I'll probably read it all over again sometime in the future.

Thanks you for your talent.

I'm with LT_Bookworm 100%. This is probably one of your best stories here. I mean, I love the sheer lunacy of the scale and scope you've got going on in your PSF Universe. But this? Oof. It's on a whole different level.

What a hard but lovely story! A must read!

What an amazing story!

Incredible story. I think I must have had dust in my eyes they wouldn't stop watering.

Thanks!

Mike R

Commendable work. Great read and story, period

Incredible story of the ups and downs in the life of Johnny… I believe someone was cutting up onions at various points in this story.

I am just glad that you finished it on a good note,, thank you

约翰尼没有选择母亲一起生活是最大的败笔，再其次也应该母女同收。只收姐姐破坏了整本书的结构，毕竟很多人是冲着母亲去的

Ok you for the most part fixed your issue that had me up in arms from the first story in the set however it's pretty clear you didn't do a deep dive into the full medical process of the brain which honestly I don't blame you much there cause damn that's a process even for doctors lol however ones brain cells are never completely damaged beyond repair as I stated before when the brain is so damaged that it seems it can't be repaired by modern medicine and tools it will start to heal itself like a muscle will do after it has been broken the brain does the same for that's what a brain is for the most it's a muscle the strongest in the human body other than that you turned into a decent story

@zfanboy1 there is always going to be a struggle when dealing with multiple personalities that can never be helped no matter what you do I myself deal with it every day having multiple personalities is different from having a damaged brain while yes johnny brain was damaged at points in the story it wasn't damaged beyond repair for as I stated the brain will heal itself having 2 personalities is something every human has but not show within everyone it takes a traumatic event to show something which johnny went through then add when the brain starts to repair it self it basically opens a gate way that allows the other personalities to come to the forefront that will countue to happen until the brain is fully healed which could take many many years depending the extent of the damage done to the brain

OMG! Very intense story! Great story!

I enjoyed this story.

5 stars

I've held off doing any comments until I had reached the end of this very entertaining story . I thoroughly enjoyed the whole story line from start to finish and I hope that I get to read another one like this from you again . As I said EXCELLENT story and thank you .

Excellent story my friend. 10/10

Wow. Very well written. You had my emotions all over the place. So thanks for the great and lengthy read 😭😊👍.

When dealing with DID there is always going to be a struggle overall this wasn't a bad series though some of the things said doesn't go with the plot of the story so it wasn't very realistic However it is a fiction story as far as the seizures goes honestly while it is a medical condition it could also be his brain trying to heal itself with it still happening even being on medication to control them and it happening out of the blue sometimes for no reason could be a sign of the brain trying to heal itself it just depends on things now Rather that is the case in this story more than likely not just by what the writer said at different times in the series but in reality that is a possibility

This is so good I read it again ! A couple of things I want to mention is that you changed the second name for the MC's daughter. Earlier it was gonna be Julia Sophia and later it became Julia Anders. Which is her namesake's last name. Also, you named her Juliet at some point. Plus there are a number of spelling mistakes and forgotten words too.

Great story, this part exceptionally long but fascinating. No rose coloured spectacles here with John's op and its aftermath. A few threads left incomplete and some text and name issues but nothing to detract fro a great story.

BIG BIRD?

Nicely done.

That was a hell of a story, wow.