All Comments on 'Unbroken Ch. 14'

Vanalas I have been your fan since destined lovers, your stories are awesome, but please be posting your stories on time, I'm looking forward to CH.15 soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And when unbroken is done please keep writing, I love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lusi is not the heir to the throne. jacob is the king's heir apparent...the scepter should have no effect. can't wait for chapter 15

It feels like you’re unnecessarily prolonging this... there’s a lot of repetition

WOW ... please post the next chapter ... FANTASTIC ! ! !

Can someone please let me know when Luis is about to get back with Aid. Amazing story but I feel like this is being dragged unnecessarily.

Too long and repetitive with no real directions. Also does it seem as though the author vanalas created an account to commitment on all the stories. Makes you say umm.

i have nothing to say..Am just mad

i hate william lyk shit..God i hate him

but am falling for the story than ever..Hehe u see william is afool he has gone without the king's info,even the scepter is gone,

So the moment they findout.....Bomb,hehe..my luis..poor king,now Angria is at stake

vanalas plz its tym for the truth,bring our love back..Aid is needed,let luis see his child,but he has to PLEAD,,enough of nosense

Cant wait my king,i love u...But william,huh let him die in hell

plz vanalas

van,ar u there???