All Comments on 'Unbroken Ch. 18'

one of the best cannot wait for the next story just knew everything was going to work out in the end

Get this published ... It is stunning ... I loved every second of it....

Can you give us any clues as to what the new story is going to be and when we will see it on here?

a fairy tale to end all fairy tales...simply awesome...it feels like being in high school that feeling of discovering how great romance novels are for the first time

all in all it was great narrative and how vivid most descriptions are whether be it a thing, an event, or a person...

vanalas i really liked all your stories: destined lovers, stand for love and forever yours...please keep on writing.

I dont care if any other writer is reading this,but vanalas u're stinking the best writer ever,no one will ever break that record.....I cant believe that all of u ar selfish,how can u be happy when my lovely story has ended???U guys are not fair at all....But unfortunately everything

has abeginning and an end...my lovely story,my luidans have left me..I kno its hard to believe but am crying right now..This chapter has been the longest and most emotional in all..Especially pages 1-11 which were too painful for me,for 11-15 were emotional and romantic

God,i know am gona take time to heal but thank u vanalas for this most mind blowing story..In this chapter i cried,smiled,laughed and got to emotional due to luis

God luis was the victim to everything..How he pleaded for several times,God Aidan can hurt..I kno am the one who asked for this but time reached when luis was making me cry from page 5-12 i was both happy Aidan was back and sad he made the guy sweat upto the hospital scene..God Aidan is hard

i cried so much when he kissed justin.God i saw our man breaking,and when he got an accident,i too died..For sure that was emotion

But can any of us forget the blessing scene????Uh???,the luis at first sight of Aidan after two years scene???Uh??,the scene of the royal family at Aidan's???Uh???,the mall scene????Uh??Guys those scenes were the most enjoyable

and the king scenes were from chapter 12-15..Those pages were MWAAAAAAAAAH especially 14 and 15,haha,u guys ar kidding..my story is the best ever

Oh did u see the vows???,hmmmm???How about love making???Uhmmmm

did u see vanalas's tricks???..how Ethan and justin ended??I knew it..They even made love haha i saw the blushes and knew.Oh even jonatha and charles,am happy for charlie..finally he has settled and oh....Hanna and henry/2H those also were mwaah

THE WEDDING SPECIAL,oh those vows.God i wanted to be in forever,diving and u reading..That beach scene..I cant exhaust everything..That kiss at the party..That HOT LOVE MAKING..vanalas one day u'l kill me

van tok to us plz about the next story before i summarise my unforgettable U.B

The life of Altair, a beautiful and successful man, who owns an emporium in the world of construction and business, that underwent strong traumas that turned him into the "Unforgiving Doña" that he is now.

Beauty is his weapon. Power is his revenge.

It’s a thrilling tale of revenge, betrayal and ambition centred on Altair Sanchez. Don’t let his looks deceive you. Sometimes the most beautiful things can also be the deadliest...

sypnosis

At a very young age, Altair falls victim to abuse by a group of young, rich men known as ‘The Monkeys,' who strip him of his innocence. Since then, the beautiful and headstrong business tycoon has learnt to use his beauty and charm to get what he wants. His determination has built an empire that allows him to take the law into his own hands, bringing to justice the men, and those like them, that caused him such harm.

Inspired by the Mexican telenovela 'LA dona'

Find out how far this vengeful titan is willing to go and whether he can ever love again, when the exciting and thrilling Iron Rose premieres.

Iron Rosé, coming soon....

You guys can choose if you want the story or I change it. I am always ready to give you another one. please, give me your views before I start writing.

But everthing deserves atry,why should we deny our lovely writer to show his magic..IRON ROSE,huh..come we are ready for u baby especially when u're from the king of writers/king him self

big up to all vanaholics,plz lets moral boost our lovely writer

Beautiful ending to a beautiful story. I might actually go back and read it for a second time, I loved it to much. Great job. You are now my favorite author lol

the theme songs for this sadly ending chapter of U.B are...diamonds by rihanna page 12-14

all of my by john legend page 15,special

page 1-11,pills and portion by nick minaj

still those pages...sorry by justin bieber

God,i'l mis u luidans

do u guys remember in the opening chapter,how luis met Aidan??That car scene,do u???

that...Haha..That second chapter where Aidan slapped luis hard??That humiliation scene

the argument that made both of them married in chapter 3??That ubrupt marriage

how they accidentally had amoment in the bathroom,.Oh the hot love making scene in chapter 5 the first one..But now luidans have left..

Do u remember how luis rushed to Aidan's house to bring him back to the palace,that confession scene????

The arguments..The introductiom,oh that chapter..I'l miss that

when that whore william came and brought amess.That seperated the great luidans???That bitch

the whole breakup..Oh the baby birth scene,that cute jacob,haha

the rescue..The return and finally the love regaining final chapter...I'll miss U GREAT LUIDANS

Wow! iron rose sounds hot. can't wait. love you van

cant wait vanalas...Am already affected by the end of U.B,for sure i swear am missing it lyk crazy...am sorry i've read 4 times now but am just getting hunger for it

nice writing am looking forwad for a new one

Can u make a side story for ethen and justin

Merry christmas to us vanaholics and to OUR LOVELY SO FAR WRITTEN STORIES

BUT ABOVE ALL...TO U VANALAS,WE LOVE U AND MAY GOD GUIDE U IN THIS NEW STORY

oh,do u guys know that iron Rose is going to premire in these festive season.????

Even though there were tiny errors u bombed it I would love to read more of your work n maybe a drama with more fight n no easy forgiving but love the works

Hello vana-family..Here in Angria every one is welcome,our home is free.....Hope tomorrow our Head will post soon

helo Angria,why ar u so silent???

Plz vanalas