All Comments on 'Uncle Charles' Proposal Ch. 03'

Two dollars for every one made is 12. 4 × 2 = 8 plus the original 4 = 12. Peter Ruck needs to learn basic mathematics. Unless Peter Rusk did not explain to the author correctly. Peter Rusk might have meant a match per earnings or the two for the one as the author wrote. But with Peter Rusk one never knows because it is his rules, not yours or mine. Peter Rusk will cover any possible error with a mind altering massage. Bow down to the power that is Peter Rusk. Peter Rusk live!.

Liking this story. Was hoping for a different direction. Wanted her to not give in and though she is learning and growth is a good thing, still would rather see her flip the bird at Peter Rusk and her uncle; especially at the end. Prefer not to have this end with a bow wrapped neatly around it.

dispite the careful justifications and so called integrity o the master ass he deserves nothing less than castration and imprisonment.

Can't leave it hanging

Please write more

She only made 4 dollars total. The conversation where they were discussing what she made happened at dinner that night. She made 50 cents an hour for 8 hours, so 4 dollars. He talked about doubling her money but I think he meant matching. So she has 8 dollars.

Not sure what the point is of complaining about an author's editing and simple math skills who cannot even spell his own user name correctly (unless 'theif' is a proper noun, then my apologies) much less the character's math skills that the author created on a sight where the content is free.

However,ire at the blatant patronization that women are treated as children and 'need' guidance that is so predominant in this story (and the BDSM community in general) seems a much more obvious place to start picking apart, despite the less satisfying results (since it seems unlikely to change in my lifetime). But hey. This is fiction, right?

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what follows is

disturbing

disgusting

degrading

and

demeaning

to anyone who follows this path

If you don't want to read this then don't!! Don't be disrespectful to another person's work!! If you hate it so much why are you even in the category..... I like this story please continue on.