All Comments on 'Uncle Tom Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
left hanging

This is the 2nd part and still no sex. left hanging again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Incredibly Sexy

I love how the author has begun building the sexual tension between the characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Well....

Well lets see here...you write really well and everything, but you forget the ENDINGS to your stories. They are all good, but you leave the readers hanging. Some advice, continue the good writing and dont forget the sex and a good ending!!!

LolitasLegacyLolitasLegacyover 17 years ago
Hmm

Well twice people have complained that you left htem hanging. Isn't that the point? You want them to read the next chapter. Their morons, don't listen. Though somewhat short, they get the job done and make you want more.

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