by BeautifulPrincess
I love how the author has begun building the sexual tension between the characters.
Well lets see here...you write really well and everything, but you forget the ENDINGS to your stories. They are all good, but you leave the readers hanging. Some advice, continue the good writing and dont forget the sex and a good ending!!!
Well twice people have complained that you left htem hanging. Isn't that the point? You want them to read the next chapter. Their morons, don't listen. Though somewhat short, they get the job done and make you want more.