All Comments on 'Unconquered Pt. 05'

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jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenover 4 years ago
Yeah!

Mab is going to be fun.

"Can I watch?" ^.^

Lovely bit of diplomacy there with Green. That's a good way to cause some trouble, and I like it. Of all the things to be able to do with limitless power, sometimes just asking open and honest questions about somebody else's life can have the most profound effects.

Favorite line from this one I think can be summed up in a fortune cookie: Today's lucky number is 63,195,202,636,900.

DragonCoboltDragonCoboltover 4 years agoAuthor

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Comentarista82Comentarista82over 4 years ago
Such an

interesting set of twists! I never expected Jerin to go with Ember, nor to be won over by what Ember's planning.

Excellent and touching moments with Ember and his dad (until the funny/unexpected conclusion). Tons of wit and funny stuff included. What a great touch to free all the slaves but then use Chirp to help Ember learn how to read.

I'm really enjoying this. It's so novel. Great job and great originality! :)

DragonCoboltDragonCoboltover 4 years agoAuthor

Thank you so much! I'm glad you guys are enjoying it!

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