All Comments on 'Uncontrollable Urge'

I'd like my 5 minutes back, please.

I would suggest that you try to find someone to proofread your stories for you. It was a challenge to read, and I could not finish it.

Your native tongue is not english, yes? Although I feel grammar correction could stifle expression, you don't fall in this category. But please write some more - the story can be extended. I enjoyed it. It had a terrific build-up and I would like to see what their situation could evolve into, especially since they work for the same firm.