All Comments on 'Uncontrollable Urges Pt. 01'

I would love to see if there's more to their story. What happens when Beck catches on to what's happening? How far will the loss of impulse control go? You've written a good start, and while it can do fine as a standalone story it has the potential to go on for at least a couple of chapters.

Really good story, would love to see where it goes.

Great writing

5 stars

Michael

Very good story.

Very well written.

Please don't leave us hanging. Please continue the story and see where it takes us.

Please write more. At least what happens the rest of the week, while dad tries to adjust her dosage. NOT!!!!

Barely started cannot finish.

I was upset there's not more to read. That was a new spin I hadn't run into before. And I liked how mom said "Give my love to Emmanuel" before she hung up. That was a nice touch. Please continue this at least until mom comes home and hopefully succumbs to her daughter's symptoms, letting Daddy of the hook or maybe you see a better more unexpected ending, either way please write more.

more of this story please

Another wank-fest. No love. no personal interaction; contrived situation.

Omg please write more on this, I would love to read more on their story and see what happens

Hot story.

Love this story! I have been in situations where boundaties and control have been tested, and you did a great job of portraying that.

Would love a follow-up story!