All Comments on 'Under A Rest Pt. 06'

1st of all all last 5 chapters were just awesome as I already said , they were just the perfection. When I came to this last chapter , I have many expectations because of the previous one and as I was reading it , it was meeting my expectations perfectly, I was just enjoying it a lot , until I arrived at the last page and the story changed it's theme from a gentle Femdom one to a partial mdom one. It was just forced to us readers , at least me , suddenly that I just couldn't bear it . Well the main driving theme about this whole story was it's gentle , loving , Femdom part and changing it suddenly in the very last part was just absurdity. An awesome story but it didn't deserve an ending like that , atleast . I mean yeah they ended in a loving relationship and that was good I like that , but changing a story's main theme that too in the very last part describes some incompetence and inexperience of writers . Not only for the reason that the readers who read it till the end were those who loved it's main theme and story and changing it means just that the author doesn't care about the readers but also that even if the author focused on the art rather than reader's likes or dislikes, changing the main theme means ruining the art as well . I am no professional writer or anything like that so it's just my opinion as a reader . Until the last page , I believed that the author is some person who have months of experience about writing these things because he wrote every detail of it perfectly but now I think , the writer is tallented but a lot less experienced . Hope we could some more stories like that where we won't find these blinders . I've rated this chapter 3/5 because of the 1st 2 pages otherwise the ending just ruined it and the last page deserved nothing more than 1 or even worse if it's possible

Ok , I did a lot of mistakes while writing it so just going to write the last part again -

Hope we will get some new stories with the same themes but not these blunders because anyone who would've read till the end can guess that the author is a real prodigy in these Femdom, loving , mind control stories .

I hear the point about the ending, but found the potential for a balanced relationship with mutual dropping both different and interesting. I certainly found myself in awe of the first 5 plus parts of the story while only "liking" the ending, yet I admire the risk and the creativity.

I also wholeheartedly agree that the author is a prodigy in Femdom, loving, mind control stories.

Amazing work. Thank you for writing and sharing!!

I propose that Dr. Maria Angelos prologue is in order, would love to know how she treaded this treacherous path for so long without being caught and her exploits with her "pantheon of playthings" in the past. Awesome writing mate. Never stop.

P.S.- The story made my weekend.