All Comments on 'Under Construction Ch. 02'

I was really enjoying your story until it became just another Magic Cock Syndrome story. As I started this new chapter, again it had an awesome start but succumbed to MCS way too soon. Considering how upset she had been, she's just going to pop open her front door to a random man? Then allow her rapist to just push his way in? What happened to the trust he shattered? Glued back together by good old MC, I guess. Then ordering, not asking her to be ready for him. Gee, if she's that easy to convince, how did she manage to get her Engineering degree?

You write well, but the speed at which their emotions flip flop just gives me mental whiplash. I thought she had a spine, and he had integrity, but obviously I was sadly mistaken about both.

I need to read Ch. 03.

This is the kind of wishy-washy story where some arsehole guy forces himself on a woman and the reader is expected to side with the view that he "raped" her. Then the stupid bitch of a woman just allows him to continue, even though he practically forces himself on her again. What are males meant to think about this type of situation? That it's ok to "force" themselves on a women if we think she is attractive and sexy looking. To hell with what she wants. She must love being "raped". They all do!!!!

Is this the message the author is putting over?

I do not excuse Kyle's first "surprise attack" on Kara, and she is right to feel violated, and fearful at seeing him again. But at the same time, does he deserve redemption after his apology? People can change, yes they can, and he seems to be taking a few of the right steps -- flowers, coming to her for forgiveness, etc. He does realize his error and forced sex was wrong. She seems a slightly more willing participant here in the sex, and maybe they can work together toward a real love. I think Kyle feels bad to see the package for the morning after pill. But I'd vote on letting him woo her through dating and dining, and slowly moving toward a real love.

I do love his appearance; she ran her fingers through the coarse hair on his chest; she kisses his chest and pecs. I think love is on the way, slowly, but on the way. Kara can eventually see the caring side. Keep them loving, and keep her caressing his hairy chest!

Her rational mind knows that Kyle is a rapist, yet she continues to let him have her way. No self-respect for herself.