All Comments on 'Under Cover Under-the-Covers'

a bit more about how she got involved with the situation. I also wonder about hubby. Undercover work requires real balls, but apparently he wasn't much of a man, but rather a wimp cuckold if he let her fuck BH for two days.

On the technical side: its "might've" and "must've" which are contractions for "might have" and "must have". Phonetically "might of" and "must of" sound the same, but they are wrong and make you seem poorly educated.

So a faithful wife becomes a whore and the husband a pathetic wimp cuckold. How sad the writer thinks this erotic.

What nonsense !! 1*

You people need to get your heads out of your asses & lookup the meaning of these words before you complain about these stories not being believable.

...but too far out to be erotic. Hit the wrong star, like but not much.

It was not the greatest story of all time but good/solid. I thought it had some steamy parts. Could it have been better, yes but that can be said about all stories. This was a good read. I'd like to see a pre or sequel

She's a doll, but I don't know how even Big Hands could get that excited, since she had bear legs. C'mon, if you're not a great speller with a great grasp of the language, get an editor, or at least a proof reader before you submit. Otherwise, a fun & moderately hot read.

The writing was great-really polished. The storyline was original as hell (though it seems familiar....for some reason....). The sex was hot as hell.

I enjoyed the cheating-to-reclaim-the-marriage angle. Hell, the poor wife was desparate. I enjoyed the tragic comedy of the whole scenario. You also interwove the backstory artfully.

I just really, really liked this story. Well done!

My only complaint is that when I read something like this, I get a little discouraged with my own writing abilities.

crazy if this story was good, total silliness.

Overall an enjoyable read but I disagree with BTTap in that there are too many errors for this to be considered "polished". "Bear legs", "stinging" them up rather than "stringing" dropped letters are just a few examples.

Yeah, FBI doesn't work that way on a bunch of counts...OK. If Sweetie could locate Hubby, the Cosa Nostra could find her and ship her some iced mackerels as a bereavement hint. BTW - Use an editor!

Quibble: they would probably gone out on BH's much bigger yacht, but then she wouldn't have the 'overboard' option for peeling! The evening would certainly have been as crammed with novelty, however! Hot Miami nights!

Really liked the Big Mouth denouement (and her new appreciation for Big Crime!)

Apologies about the editing. This was originally a paper I wrote for college about 5 years ago, and then has saved it as a PDF. From the PDF I imported it into word which did not like the format change at all as I tried to import it into Literotica. I had to do some major changes just to get the format down right - should have re-read it once more to ensure everything was polished.

Hope I speak for all of us who mentioned editing. I am a big fan of 'the cold light of morn' where I give any writing which needs to be correct and understandable at least one night's 'sleep' before re-reading and going to next (or final) draft.

Thank you so much for your contribution. Hope I was clear that I liked it despite quibbles!

I like it. Simple, straightforward fun. Easy to wank to.

This couple came out ok but could have lost it all due to life styles of the parties involved. Drugs and money equal loose sex and STDs and sometimes pregnancy. Greg should have never risk life and family for an assignment, deep cover can and does destroy married agents and their families. I am wondering how much of the specialness and intimacy jas been lost. I also wonder after having depths that had never been reached touched and stretched will affect her and her ability to be faithful.

Just another whore and cuck playing at marriage.