All Comments on 'Under My Umbrella Pt. 03'

What a great story!. Love the way you wrote it. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Classic story of the type you write so well.

Another wonderful tale. I'm never disappointed by your romances.

Thank you for bringing us another one.

I do love that Hollies' song - I was wondering, all through reading this, whether the song had something to do with the story. :)

Thank-you for another great read. :)

Well done, loved the whole story - fresh, entertaining and they made a great couple.

But... you need to check our spelling!!

Re-read the gifts she bought for Christmas - I did laugh though!

And... Naial... I'm Celtic, through & through...100% & have a cousin....Naill --!

Sometimes just Nail in Gaelic.

5*

VBR

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As I've come to expect from you, I greatly enjoyed this story and I look forward to more. Thanks, for your efforts!

Bus Stop has always been one of my favorite songs. Gentle, sweet love story. Good things come to those who wait.

I loved this entire series and am a sucker for a happy ending.

I really enjoyed your story. It was so loving and it showed patience.

Once again, you did great! Darn good story telling abilities, with realistic sex thrown in, without it being overboard. Just keep plugging along, please.

Another great story. I have read and enjoyed many of your other stories also.

Good story, but was he glad they came for the visit or glad they left for their home?

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Craig

“ We had been a bit apprehensive when her folks said they wanted to visit, after they'd left for home we were so glad they did.”

What can I say, but another great story. Thank you. 10 stars.

What can I say. I try to compare them with your other stories, but this one I think was your best, Bringing out the ignorance, and prejudice of some people. Not letting it change their fallings for each other. Number one an all of your stories. 15 Stars!!

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A beautiful story, beautifully written!

11/10!!!!!

Well done!! A real feel good story.Nice to have a happy ending.

Excellent - thanks great story.