All Comments on 'Under the Crescent Moon'

Reading time 15 minutes? I am an average speed reader (even slow) and this story took me less than 3 minutes. Good story idea but to me it started off stiff and never provided vivid details. I hope you try to expand the story. Good luck.

I enjoyed the story. There is a lot of potential for the Neverafter. Keep up the good work.

Shame it's not your thing. This will not be expanded.

Thank you LongTimer2. The timeline of the story is set just before the beginning of the series. I'd recommend checking out Dimension 20's Neverafter on YouTube because it's very enjoyable seeing how they play with combining many fairy tales leaning into their horror origins. Nara the fairy doesn't show up until the end but the cast couldn't get over how hot the mini was and one of them demanded steamy fanfic in the behind the scenes, so I did my best.