All Comments on 'Under the Porcelain Pt. 01'

I would definitely like to see part 2. This story disappeared for a few days so I was worried it wouldn't continue at all

Please do a part 2, and if possible go into a bit more detail with each action, which I realize sounds vague, but just a bit more would be wonderful.

Hi there,

I'm glad you enjoyed the story! I left it open-ended on purpose - if there's interest I can definitely do a Part 2.

I will try my best to add more detail - although poor Henry won't have the chance to enjoy it!

Kind regards

CongoloBistone

Yes, please do a part two or more. I love a "be careful what you wish for story". Your main character put himself in his predicament willingly but had not considered how far the girls may go with their captive... Love it

A great story by an accomplished author. I loved it. I was not reading any 'story' but was there. Please write more I beg you. Your audience is waiting.