All Comments on 'Under Your Control Scene 03'

by BabyBlue2005

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CanadianMCanadianMover 17 years ago
Great story

your stories are always so erotic and make me feel as though I was there watching..

John048John048over 17 years ago
wanted to wait until finished the third one

wow very erotic Babyblue could almost feel the intensity of both people through all 3 scenes and was worth every bit to reach the end, great writing dear

borgthemagicianborgthemagicianabout 16 years ago
Stunning....Enthralling

Awesome, a superb climax merely hinted at previously. I love the way you liken her to a fine Merlot, so imaginative, so expressive? Fantastic, I have to say, I wish it was me!!

BabyBlue, I'm very impressed, even jealous of your creativity and skill in portraying a beautiful moment. Wow... xxx

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