All Comments on 'Undercover Cop - Captured'

Ridiculous ending to an equally ridiculous story. She gets gangbanged by a punch of pond scum, no STD's, no pregnancy, then she's right back to work, ready to solve all the world's problems again? Wtf.

I really enjoyed this one, strong work.

Love the story. Well written.

I liked the ending. I don't come here for real, I come here for sexy.

beautiful nd srong.

I loved this more than I expected to! An interesting and nontraditional take on noncon.

Your writing style is so dry that you sucked all of the naughtiness and enjoyment out of the story. I felt like someone was reading a recipe for a very bland chicken soup. The premise was hot and promising, but the delivery fell thru, leaving me very bored and disinterested....also, zero empathy build up for the characters...to the point that I really didn't give a shit as to what might happen to any of them!

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