All Comments on 'Undercover Freak: Size Queen-After'

Is Holly Santos the same Holly McMichael from Dirty Dawg Big Boss Booty. ..?

I hope we see a bit of Martha in action.

Great work...

It’s not just the quality of the writing for the sex scenes, you’re able to flesh out the characters themselves, in a non-cookie cutter way. None of them feel like blow-up dolls, but people, people with real, relatable issues. Not just this story but you’re entire catalog.

It’s obvious that this is a passion of yours. Pumping out quality for this long. You need to consider setting up a subscription service for these stories via Social Media or your own website. Or selling a book via Amazon. Or Both.

Thanks for pushing out another amazing piece for Labor Day weekend.

We all look forward to your next installment. Now, get some BBQ already lol.

The story lasted a couple of silly paragraphs, then the after story goes for 4 pages! The actual few paragraphs of story made no sense whatsoever.

The format / tools of the site does not allow writers to organize their story arcs properly in some cases. So, that being said, I've included the proceeding story title to help you make sense of the story itself.

1.)Undercover Freaks Vol. 01: Size Queen

2.)Undercover Freak: Size Queen-After

This is the correct chronological order of this story. I broke it up into two installments after realizing I'd written a small novel for free.

Well, gee. Why didn't you put Vol 2 in the title, or at least put a note at the start to tell readers this is part 2 of a story. Don't blame me for your mistake.

Feel better.

BTW, thank you for reading the story.

Geez, you've just gotta love a raging narcissist.

I love the fact that you have full fleshed out characters with their personalities and back stories rather just interchangeable action figures where I practically can’t remember the names of the main characters mid story because they are so generic. You are an awesome writer and when I see you post a story I gotta make time to check it out. I appreciate your writing.

UNDERCOVER FREAKS Volume 2: "The Butt" ??????

Bruh I feel like I'm having withdrawals after rw-reading this story. Come on man don't leave us hanging. UPDATE;!!

Anonymousabout 1 hour ago

Bruh I feel like I'm having withdrawals after rw-reading this story. Come on man don't leave us hanging. UPDATE;!!

mondotoken: Did you read Gamer Girl? It happens right after this story.