All Comments on 'Undercover Pt. 02'

I like the pacing. She’s not really intending to jump off the cliff, it is just not quite time to swerve. Totally not going to jump off. I mean, not swerving now, but for sure, probably before the cliff edge.

Very good.

It looked interesting but Lindsey didn't even resist temptation for 2 pages!

That was great! I love the focus on the submissive nature of performing oral, and I really hope she does it every day from now on, like he said. It is a slight shame that she never resisted at all, and she's falling right into this with no hesitation, but not every story is about a battle of wills. If she didn't resist going down on him, then I really doubt she'll resist sex, or anything else. I'm excited to see where this is going! Please continue!

excellent

more please

Not sure about undercover and getting fucked but all the restaurants and clubs in cities across the country have vip areas with local sports teams and the visitors teams . Every hot girl gets back there with a shot to duck a star. Know plenty of people and stories. Many white woman have had their fantasy of a black cock and famous person achieved. A friends younger cousins in Miami got into a club vip with a rappers crew . The two cousins and two friends all hot twenty something’s had a ball and were then asked back to continue the party at a mansion close by where they had more dick in every way poswell into the next night . They even were talked into girl on girl as well . Two loved the experience but the other two felt liked a used up dirty slut. They couldn’t even tell you how many dicks fucked them . They all had to go to their ob’s for tests for std’s. The two who had a great time kept in contact and were passed around different groups around other low level stars. They were two of many as they were labeled white bitches that were savage fucked every time. Apparently their last time out in La it wasn’t the stars but a group of there friends that fucked them then layed them down doing a crazy circle jerk all over their faces . That was a wake up call and end to the excitement of the stars parties. Was told they had a hard time dating locally as most knew the stories and were disgusted by it

Great read!!

Going as expected!

4

This has so much potential - loving it. Would like to see some public sex, pimped out to a gang, tatted up, maybe some drugs but so many options. Keep it going please

Been waiting and checking daily for this chapter and so excited for it! I loved it! Her hiding the truth from her captain and enjoying messaging him and recognising that she wanted to go and meet him was really sexy!

Surprised she gave him a blowjob so soon but really looking forward to her corruption continuing with her wanting to have sex with him. Love the idea of him making her get a crotch tattoo or something as well to prove her loyalty to him! Just an idea but either way cannot wait for chapter 3! Only wish is that it’s longer :)

I have really looked forward to chapter three of this series and further to see just how far our illustrious cop will fall into the rabbit hole. I am disappointed it has taken this long to write the next chapter

Chapter is rather short and the action is a bit unrealistic and too consensual, however a lot of potential to take it a bit more reluctant or noncon. Keep rolling, you are an excellent writer.

Wow, this one hot story, yes keep these coming...xoxo

Very well written

Great story keep it going

amazing