All Comments on 'Undercover Whore Ch. 02'

Oh, I know that there are other chapters already written but please get an editor. The single line dialog is killing your story. Sucking off men in the morning or all day and then eating sushi? Really? Then Madison is again left without any guidance by Candy and Candy wonders what happened? Does Madison even get any of the money from the gloryhole place? What kind of report does Madison have to make? THere is no guidance from her police department on what she is supposed to do. No birth control and Madison is not even considering getting any. Heck, just yesterday she was a virgin and the next she is getting sex crazed? I am surprised she has not just thrown up due to all of the cum she sucked.