All Comments on 'Underneath'

Bravo!

I'm not usually into feminization but this story was more about a lingerie fetish and I love all fetishes. Wonderfully sexy story!

That was nice. Obviously we need follow up chapters to continue the experiment, explore the possibilities... ^^

MORE!!!!

You dear Author, are reaching new heights with this story! This your best to date in my opinion. Congratulations! While I very much appreciated your disclosure on the front end, this is nothing other than sexy, sensual and, frankly, fun! A fantastic standalone story and also one you could return to and expand on. Five Stars times five!

OMG That was a super hot story. It kept me rock hard reading this. I kinda wish I was Nick. I’m wondering if you are going to continue with this hot storyline? I have to give it 10 stars. Thank you.

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I thought I wouldn't like it at first, but I'm definitely loving this story so far.

OMG! This was not only HOT AS HELL it was also funny. The cat and mouse game Jess is playing goes way beyond the usual Dom/Sub rolls. I am absolutely amazed by this imaginative story. You have really out done yourself with this one. I'm really sorry that you chose THE END instead Part 1. This had endless possibilities written all over it. Five stars are way too few for this great story. Thanks, MLF

Great story. I'm naturally a top rather than being particularly dominant, but can imagine being just like that with a sexy, younger guy in lingerie. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter and I think we both know what Nicholas wants; I have a feeling that Jess won't be able to stop himself!

Omg soooo good... Pls give us a part 2

@furluvrca

Thank you :)

@Straycatndc

I'm glad that even if you usually don't like the feminization part, you still enjoyed the story ;)

@TalkSexyToMe2029

I'll try to write some more :)

@dnsontn

Thank you so much for such kind words, it really means so much to me, as I sometimes struggle to find a strength to put myself through another day. It is a big motivation for me.

@ShortyMac

I'm glad that I managed to keep you in happy place :D

@BlowPopJ

I hope the second part also will be to your liking. :)

@Anonymous

Thanks, MLF - it is not a typical dom/sub story, but have some elements of it. I'm glad that you still found that entertaining. :)

@Markbike

And you are correct, it will go and go... until the unavoidable will happen :)

@Themike21

I started it yesterday ;)

I see the end. So this is complete. Guys, don't push the author.

Definitely a great story. I would like to be in Nick's position. Please let your creative writing skills show how much more you come up with!!!

Very hot. I had a similar experience with my first male lover. I was his boss at work but after he seduced me. I wound up being his bitch. Total switch of roles that we both just fell into, he made me realize I wasn't the big stud I thought I was, instead, I was just the opposite after I was dominated by him.

@ Anon

Thank you guys, I'll do my best!

@Nicebiguy

Yes, I know what you mean! Once I also thought I was this big Chad and I met some small twinks that had a potential to make me into a slave for their............. you know :) Sweet personalities :D But did they?

Haha... It's another story :) It had to be reviewed case by case. :)

Keep on writing, I enjoyed this story .

I loved this story.

Loved it

Excellent: ★★★★★ (5.0)!

Very very erotic.

This story very erotic. It is also romantic.

5.0 = 💯% (🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟) ❤!

Above expectation but, on principle, the highest mark I give out is 5.0 (100% = A+).

Hope more is on the way .Very sexy, I want to be Nicolas.

Wow!!! This is a great story!! I was so hard and would love to have someone dominate me like that!!! I love the story line. I'm actually wearing a pink thong as I write this. It definitely has a wet spot after reading your story!! Great job and please keep writing!!

@Badboy1616, I have started 4 part, but still haven't finished :D

That is an amazingly sexy story, incredibly well told and believable. It's an inspiration to me. Thank you!

So sexy!!!!

@SummerSammy

:)

@SomaSlave

I appreciate you reading it!