All Comments on 'Underneath a Warm Afternoon Sun'

Wow. Loved the story and the detail. Much sexual tension, desire and anxiety. Highly enjoyable read.

Great story.

You finally recieve your crush's load and don't swallow?

Very nice

Thoroughly enjoyed this story. All the detail leading up to the main event. A bit long but you warned us. The description of the sex was detailed and hot but surprised he didn't swallow. Since they were going camping for a couple of days you could easily add another chapter. Please consider!

Thanks for the feedback! You're right, he should be guzzling that cum :)