All Comments on 'Unearthly Secrets Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I enjoyed the story. Hopefully Ch. 2 will be out soon and maybe Jack and his mom can continue their tradition.....

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Kind of boring and a letdown 3 *'s

foren7813foren78134 months ago

I am not usually a fan of the Sci-Fi genre, but I found this approach very unique and interesting! Chapter one was a little more fast paced than I would have liked, but I did enjoy the story immensely!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Not too bad. I would like to read more. How about background on why some get married and some don't.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Hope more written soon

SildaniSildani4 months ago

Nice story. I like where it seems to be going. Tittyfucking tag, but no act, hopefully means some titfucking is in the near future.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Liked the story but not much sex to it 4 stars

ilikeskin69ilikeskin694 months ago

Good waiting for more...AL

Fenris420Fenris4204 months ago

I really like the clever premise and can't wait to see where it goes. I hope you keep adding to the scifi backstory... it makes for nice icing on this incest harem cake. 5/5*

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Liked the story but it should be on Sci-Fi 4 stars

laughdruidlaughdruid3 months ago

I enjoyed the twist in the story but why did you portray Jack as a 14 year old when you stated that he was 20 years old? 4Stars

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