All Comments on 'Unexpected Ch. 06'

Well the whole Alex/Callen thing i can see that (Alex liking/crushing on Callen), but i still can't see Callen being gay. I mean with the bond he has with his brother i don't understand why would he feel the need to hide his sexuality (IF he actually is gay and had other kind of relationship with Alex)

[Also.. what is up with Sasha, if no one likes her (from the little we have seen her) why does she keep coming back like she owns the place]

Love the direction you're taking all these characters. Keep it up!!

Nooooo this is like the worst cliff hanger in the history of cliff hangers

Nice twists :)

The story has begun well, but now goes in the wrong direction.

Yeah i also think the story had a great start, but the last chapter are not holding on to the same as the 1st and 2nd.. (and i'm not saying that bc things are not going the way i want xD) but maybe is that the chapters are so short we don't get to read many "good" things? (Ohh and yup, i would also rather wait a little bit more for a longer chapter)

Started off quite all right, but they're turning into pretty basic/shallow characters and the twists are akin to those of highschool drama shows. Give your characters more substance, mind your clutter, and take your time.

Where is dis going......it started nicely and sweet.....i now don't see de head and tail of it.....i hope you redeem yourself in de next chapter......

your writing is very good so keep writing please do not leave an unfinished story. Thank you.

Was going along so good then W#F? Your story is good. Please redeem yourself in the next chapter. And soon!

i like ur story so far n i like the confusion twist in this chapter brings history n a bit of mystery

SO CLICHEED AND PREDICTABLE . NOTHING "UNEXPECTED" IN THIS SO CALLED "NOVEL"

I am never surprises that "Anonymous" has so many rude comments and unhelpful criticisms of budding author's work. I've never seen any work by Clicheed Anonymous, so one must wonder what makes him an authority. Those who can do, those who can't criticize.