All Comments on 'Unexpected Guest Ch. 02'

Yes finally an update. And is was well worth the wait. I didn't realise that Ann's brother was the same Cade from undercover, until you spelled it out for me. lol.

Keep 'em coming!

to see that you're back! Please update soon, don't keep us waiting too long. Didn't catch the reference to Cade of Undercover until I read the other poster's comments. Nice sequel, made me want to read Undercover again. =)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

I enjoy your stories. I think she should just enjoy being alone in a cabin with a guy she obviously finds quite attractive. Cut back on the snarling and get to purring ;)

i hope more of this story is coming soon this is sooo hottt

This is a great story and extremely well written. I eagerly await the next chapter.

I'm amazed at the number of readers who think a story about a macho thug and a young girl is interesting. I think the two of them should get their guns and hunt down her evil bastard of a brother, then maybe Ann could shoot her brothers friend and live in peace.

the Ct. Yankee

Glad to see you decided to continue the series. Good job.

so glad you've started a new story, i can't wait to read more! please post a new chapter soon!!

He’s acting like a bully.

I don’t think it sexy at all.

& it seems she isn’t reacting to him either.

Yet he says to himself that he needs to tone it down but then doesn’t.

That’s not lust that’s selfishness & bullying in my books—not a turn on.

Another short and typical chapter. An annoying typo over the meal, it's gulped or more likely wolfed down her food, and that wording was too strong for me as it implied greed and poor manners. But that's my opinion.

Surprised she didn't try to ever hear conversation with Cade but that might have spoiled the rest of the story.

As per usual I really liked it though.

Looking good for a great read.