All Comments on 'Unexpected Love Ch. 01'

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Anonymousabout 8 years ago

The name of Dylan's girlfriend went from being Melissa to being Michelle. Overall it was pretty good. Can't wait to read the next chapters.

Anonymousover 7 years ago

Worthless cunt

Husband busts his ass for the ungrateful bitch, and she fuck a relative.

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