All Comments on 'Unexpected Pleasures'

A slut like that would get ditched quick!

It was somewhat lacking in detail. Also, how can the wife go from not really liking sex very much to total nympho in a nasty mens room with total strangers? If you described it, or had some paragraphs about you (or some other guy at the party) getting her worked up, it might make sense.

Story is shitty.....With all that cum shot and she did not get preggy and none seemed to run down her bare thighs?

Not much of a story. no plot, no character development, no one to cheer for or against. To anonymous from Texas; We morons read these storys to see if we will like them. Why do you morons read them? the Ct. Yankee

That could never happen in the real world.

I never have figured out why people read these stories and then leave bad comments. I enjoyed your story and woulde love to read more. Keep up the great work!

Why are they reading these stories if they don't like them?

Some times I think there is only one moron with to little to do.

Loved it. Please write more.

This was short and to the point, not overly descriptive, but satisfactorily so. Something very similiar happened to me and my wife many years ago, so maybe I identify with it. Well done.

Reads like a bad porn movie

This is about exhibitionisim going too far. And a very real, albeit rare occurance. And very exciting. Who hasn't wanted to, or on the rare occasion, actually taken their significant other into a public restroom, closet off a bar or etc. and had some fun. The real fun is the chance of getting caught, and having to pay the price. {LOL} This gal just happened to instigate it herself. Good for her. And good for him too. And very arrousing too!

exercise of the art of pointless story telling.

who needs other men to turn his wife on.

HO HUM!