All Comments on 'Unexpected Threesome Ch. 41'

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UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 4 years ago
Good story as usual

But you need to proof read before submitting. It is detracting from the story to pick through incorrect or missing words.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Best ever!

You are a master at your craft! Your literary offering is tender with character development, searing with sexual tension and very believable. It has been an erotic emotional journey that I sincerely hope will continue. Thank you for your good works and the sweet tensions you have recreated in these old bones. Well done. Best ever!

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I like writing about nice, even romantic, sex with nice people. In most cases my writing is inspired by people I have met and experiences I have had or watched others have. Sometimes the description of the person I include in my stories is almost recording a mental photograph...

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