by Joanmcarthy
But you need to proof read before submitting. It is detracting from the story to pick through incorrect or missing words.
You are a master at your craft! Your literary offering is tender with character development, searing with sexual tension and very believable. It has been an erotic emotional journey that I sincerely hope will continue. Thank you for your good works and the sweet tensions you have recreated in these old bones. Well done. Best ever!