All Comments on 'Unexpected Turn of Events Ch. 15'

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mizzhot1mizzhot1about 13 years ago
Awsome

That was fucking awsome

toadbliss11toadbliss11about 13 years ago

OMG!!! this chapter was insane.

donaldedonaldeabout 13 years ago
that was spectacular

that was great i just got reading and as soon as i write this i am going to go reread it now i really can not wait for the next chapter thank you so much for posting

five stars aint enough i am not even sure ten times that would be enough

Angel rules

mokkelkemokkelkeabout 13 years ago

yes! this was so good. finally those bitches put in their place!!

i just love how angel reacted at the end" how's this for a surprise?" priceless =)

cool66cool66about 13 years ago

god

i just loved

specially d last punch angel threw abt suprising d pack

beatiful

keep it coming'

NightpleasureNightpleasureabout 13 years ago

I just love your writing. Your stories are wonderful, I can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
This is Brilliant!!!!!!!!

I Loved this chapter. Every turn and corner I loved. I LOVED the humor in this chapter! You wouldn't believe how hard I was laughing with Isobel pretending to fight--she's a firecracker. Both of the twins are firecrackers lol. And I loved the humor in the end about surprising the pack lol. I can't wait for the next chapter and I hope you post it soon!!!!!!!! The aftermath of this evening.....ohhh can't wait!!!!

IzkaPlm18IzkaPlm18about 13 years ago
Well done butt-munch

You know butt-munch...your stories are turning out better and better!!! lol Now... start writing the next chapter already!!!

Luv,

your sis.

jimbodenjimbodenabout 13 years ago
Excellent

Very good. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Can't wait for more

That was too awesome. Please POST more soon. Can't wait for more

MizTMizTabout 13 years ago
Here Now

is what I haven't told you about this story. I love the fact that from the time Angel wakes up and hits Cullen with the pillow until the pack kneels to her one by one, you made it happen all in one day. And it has been one hell of a day. You did a fantastic job on this chapter, now get to work on the next one if you haven't already. lol

Thanks for the mention, but it really is all you!

chelo2012chelo2012about 13 years ago
Fantastic!

Deam! This chapter was exiting! You got me at the edge of my bed, my heart was pounding exited. Please dont take too long to post the next one.......;-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
love it

i have ready every story to do with weres on here i could the long ones and our is right up their with jaz and reverand i cant wait to see the rest of this story and how it plays out

bearmad1963bearmad1963about 13 years ago
Excellent

Loved it had me hooked from start to finish nad gripping my chair whille reading the fighting scene. Very good More please and soon.

lucianloverlucianloverabout 13 years ago
Great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

you couldnt have written this better!!!!!AT LEAST YOU LEFT MY NETHER REGIONS ALONE THIS WEEK!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

NicE job on the confrontation. I find I am really hooked on izzy and owen's story. Are edana and Layla done scheming? Somehow I doubt it

ZanysDellZanysDellabout 13 years ago
ABOUT TIME!!!

YEAH ANGEL!

mikothebabymikothebabyabout 13 years ago
awesome

Just totally awesome, finally that bitch got what she deserved. But I feel this is far from over. Please continue with this engrossing story. thanks as always for sharing your talent with us.

foxy_lady76foxy_lady76about 13 years ago
incredible

unbelievably good .... Can't wait until the next chapter.

greendraco85greendraco85about 13 years ago
omg

oh my god i had to check my pulse during the fight it was so good. I want to see what happens to Izzy next and who is truly pulling the string.

GlosUKGlosUKabout 13 years ago
Yeah

Go Angel.

Fab chapter.

msjay123msjay123about 13 years ago

GO TEAM ANGEL!!!!!!!! WOOOHOOOOO!!!! That was an AWESOME chapter!!!!! I can not WAIT till the next!!!!! Please HURRY!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
OMG WOW

Okay so i agree that the chapters have been short BUT this story is fantastic, cant wait to see where you take it next, and see if there is a litter on the way, maybe that is why she changed so quickly?

lostchickenlostchickenabout 13 years ago
Fantastic!

Can't wait to find out what caused the early transformation but the timing was perfect in my book. Lots in here but glad to see things settling between them.

Gotta say - she really is a bitch sometimes. Thank goodness it now an Alpha status LMAO!!!

TheGryphonsOnFIRETheGryphonsOnFIREabout 13 years ago
Heres my thoughts on why Angel changed so soon:

A) She was pregnent befor culen Mated her and her wolf is moving quikly to protect the cubs or...

B) She was an inactave werewolf from the beginning.

But from the clue that Bad_Girl69 dropped in this chapter I'd say it's A.

But I could be wrong...

WitchofNovemberWitchofNovemberabout 13 years ago
Excellent!

I just found your story today. I love it. The quality of writing and plot are just getting better and better.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
need more

Need more what about the sister and the plot to kill Angel

amienicholeamienicholeabout 13 years ago

More more more please!!!!!!

kelleigh0127kelleigh0127about 13 years ago
Please there is so much expression in your writting don't stop ch16-20 is need

More, More , More I need to know if Angel is preggies and what's happening with the other pack. Have to out and out know who's trying to harm Angel ( sorry some things have to be spelt out for me ).... Please More!

LustyMinx4ULustyMinx4Uabout 13 years ago
oh hell yea!!!

that chapter was awesome i can't wait for more. Please hurry :)

Mega15Mega15about 13 years ago

i beg you on my hands and knees to keep writing this story i will die if you dont!!

shortydeeshortydeeabout 13 years ago
Thank You !!!!!!!

I was wondering just how long it would take for Angel to stepup. Now I would like to see Izzy and Owen get started...LOL

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyabout 13 years ago
Ohhhh

Sweet hell, I laughed my tush off reading this chapter!!!

Now to find out who is trying to get rid of Angel, I think i know but can't wait to know for sure.

ladybug71ladybug71about 13 years ago
SWEET!!!!

That was one bad-ass chapter, in having Angel put Layla plus Edana in their places!!!! I just hope they are not the stupid ones in trying to get rid of Angel, but I don't think they are....I think it's Catriona. Keep up the fantastic writing, please, and hurry with the next chapter....I'm on edge!!! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Isobel is still my favorite character! Everything she says and does makes me laugh so hard! I would like to also note my satisfaction that the little bitch Layla has been put in her place, plus Edana. Now to find out who has been trying to kill Angel...

SunshineChica73SunshineChica73over 12 years ago

Now that's how you kick ass and take names!!! GREAT CHAPTER!

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxabout 12 years ago
hi....

I speak 4 my friend who screamed so much that she passed out and is now on the floor...she has a smile on her face...this must b her fav chapter....

celesteycelesteyabout 12 years ago
Love it

This is the best chapter yet...... Can't wait to read the rest!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Go Angel!!!

I must say for her name to be angel she is a bit of a devil.. Lol total contradiction!! And I'm so glad she put the beats on that bitch Layla she was pissing me off whoo! Can't wait for more.. P.s is angel part were? Maybe that explains here shifting so quick?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Angel and Isobel

Angel finally got that bitch...whooo!! but i was on d floor lol when i read the part with Isobel when Angel was fightin...love this chapter keep it up...dwl!!!

Jack2303Jack2303about 12 years ago
OMG!!!!!!!

I FREAKIN' LOVE IT!!!! Great job :)

oneboobeeoneboobeealmost 12 years ago

This was awesome!!!!!!!! Angel don't play when it comes to her man.

EuphoriaSlam69EuphoriaSlam69over 11 years ago
Like TOTES Fer Sure!

Paws down BEST chapter so far! Especially the part as others have said when Isobel screams at her twin to kick her fucking ass and rip her fucking throat out and starts shadow-boxing as her sister's fighting! Hilarious! Hahahahahahaha!

sharongscssharongscsalmost 11 years ago
wow

About time layla and edana were put in their place ....

dairetodairetoover 10 years ago
Good chapter

Loved the fight scene...

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