by FemmasXXY
I remember she said in one of the previous chapters (the sister) she wanted to save her virginity for someone special. I guess her brother, being a literal agent of the Organizers (gods of the universe) isn't that special ;) Shame there's no more chapters. Would have loved to see her become her brother's sexy wife after giving it up to him and bear his children. That would have been hot.
I really enjoyed this concept, definitely gonna fuel my fantasies for a while.
it's being 6 years. Please continue. Add spice with Bro-Sis love. Virginity lost to her brother, and she wants a baby from brother. like that. This is so a good story.
I agree, would love to see more of this story, but you've been quiet for a long time so....
as it's been 4.5 years since this chapter. Too bad, cuz this was a good one. I would really like to read more.
The lack of continuation is explained in their description
It is very refreshing to see where an author has established a premise for a story involving 'mind control' in which the teller is not a sex mad blithering idiot looking out only for himself. I hope that the delay in posting of additional chapters is so that you feel you are creating interesting and enjoyable sequences rather than that you have found something else that will remove you from our sight. Please keep writing and posting the results for our continued entertainment and enjoyment.
I have so far enjoyed this story so so much, and find that it has great potential just please don't stop just yet. I can't wait to see this series expand to its full potential :) thank you for the stories so far
Incredibly well done, please keep going, these are very well written!
He should invite his sister to come to the twins place with him.
God these are awesome. This is exactly what I've been looking for in a story. Keep em coming!