All Comments on 'Unfaithful'

by dragonfire6

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Paul ReaganPaul Reaganover 13 years ago
Great read!

I like how you didn't fill in too many details about how you (narrator) and Nikki met, it leaves much to the reader's imagination. A nice quick read, but a good one. Here's hoping there's a continuation...?

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteover 13 years ago
Good story start, hope he gets caught...

....and I say torch the dick. There, it's all even!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Sorry excuse for a man and I hope he gets caught. And you know that the slut wasn't really on the pill and she is trying to force his hand in leaving hjis wife.

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
There is no good way

for this to ever work out.

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