All Comments on 'Unfinished Business Pt. 02'

I'm really loving this story. You come up with great ideas and develop fun characters. I especially liked Frank's shenanigans. LOVE YOUR WORK!

This was a really cool and unique story! I hope there’s more on the way!

Thanks. I appreciate that. I try very hard to come up with the most unique ideas I can. I kind of got the idea of Frank from the movie Hollowman. If you've ever seen that. In it, there is an invisible man that starts playing with a woman's nipple. All you see are the effects on the nipple. It's pretty hot.

Thanks. There will be at least one or two more chapters.

This was amazing...

I want more

Thanks, I appreciate that. You have at least two more chapters after this one. I might return to this story in the future, but I'm working on two other ones right now.