All Comments on 'Unintended Consequences'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This is a pretty likely doomsday scenario if mind control really worked the erotic story way.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I was a little worried about where you were going when the ex showed up, but you went in a direction I never would have guessed. Good job writing a fun story with an unusual twist.

2soon2no2soon2noabout 1 year ago

If I could believe in a god, it would be like this for her. Sexual bliss for eternity. Hmm. Maybe it will be good for a millennia or two.

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