All Comments on 'Unintentional Nudist'

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No1holywoodNo1holywoodabout 1 year ago

Great story, would love to read more

GaiusPetroniusGaiusPetroniusabout 1 year ago

Delightful. The foundation of erotica is fantasy, considering that the brain is the principal sex organ. Loss of a spouse when the marriage is a happy one is tragic. The blossoming of a new relationship is all the sweeter. Not only have you spun a good erotic yarn; you've also spun it with flair and high, literary skill. I look forward to reading more of your work. 5*****!

AndrewMarxAndrewMarxabout 1 year ago

Really well written but it's hard to believe that he would be so clueless when Jane basically threw herself at him. Still a very fun read and very well structured.

Shaglus_ZieglerShaglus_Ziegler11 months ago

Sexy and fun! Cheers 🥂

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Too bad that Jane didn't get a chance with the author!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Great Story!! More Please.

wwaldripwwaldrip8 days ago

Excellent story enjoyed reading it

AnonymousAnonymous8 days ago

Great stuff and very nicely done. Thanks.

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I like to write and started writing erotica some years back as an exercise to improve my descriptions of things and actions. I guess I want to see if I have any talent at writing and to improve what little I probably do have.