by knowsbetterxx
Delightful. The foundation of erotica is fantasy, considering that the brain is the principal sex organ. Loss of a spouse when the marriage is a happy one is tragic. The blossoming of a new relationship is all the sweeter. Not only have you spun a good erotic yarn; you've also spun it with flair and high, literary skill. I look forward to reading more of your work. 5*****!
Really well written but it's hard to believe that he would be so clueless when Jane basically threw herself at him. Still a very fun read and very well structured.