All Comments on 'Union Pt. 01'

Good start

Please write more, what happened to Thomas's first wife? How are his children? What is their age gap and why did they marry in such haste? Is Lillian more submissive?

Also do they both want to get her pregnant straight away or will one of them have to be talked round to it? Bareback only relationships are particularly passionate and intimate, a wife is completely at her man's mercy to impregnate and I wonder if Lillian would love being filled with Thomas's babies. Perhaps he can teach her to please him like a good old fashioned wife with her mouth and bottom while they're at it. Keep writing!