by westjayne495
The paragraph, "being sent to Coventry" and "they no longer practice that sport in London" had me laughing as it brought back memories.
Loving this story of discovery, 5 stars +, great job Jayne.
Cheers, Andy
Talk about a cliff hanger! What a terrible place to stop! Love how you write and can't wait for the next installment. Great job!
Lovely start to the story, Jayne.
So many delicious opportunities to take this to the next level, as I’m sure you will.