All Comments on 'Unknown Caller Ch. 02'

Loved it keep up the good work

Please continue, I am enjoying your story.

This is shaping up to be a great story. I want to meet John. Chomping at the bit for the next chapter.

Please take a moment to vote and/or leave me a comment. Your feedback helps me improve and sometimes turns me on !

Thank you ,

tbabyhot

Very powerful images leap off the page, as you describe the interactions that exist first in the minds of Trish and John, and then their actual meeting. You convey emotions and desires in such an erotic way. You have made my heart beat faster. I am torn between the desire to rush ahead into the third chapter, or savor the moment. I will wait... as I would slow down at the end of a satisfying meal to enjoy the dessert. Chapter three will still be there waiting when I am hungry again.

Now tell the truth,, You actually received a misterious call huh ?? Noone could just make up the detail you write. Turned me on until "Who laid it !!!!"