All Comments on 'Unlikely Love'

I hope you're going to carry on with this story, see how they develop and what becomes of them.

I enjoyed reading this and hope u continue to write more of it would like to see more of them together

I mean, what's worse? Your son found to be a stripper, or you going to jail for domestic assault and battery to your son and his boyfriend? That dumbass deserves jail.

Gosh. I think I'm in love with Rune Too. Nice story, lovely characters, and leaves me wanting this love affair in the story to continue and get even hotter.

oh my FUCKING GOD -hits dad 40 times with belt- HOW DOES IT FEEL BITCH? LEAVE RUNE ALONE YOU FUCKING BITCH IL BEAT YO DUMB ASS UP stupid dumb mother fucker

Plz continue with this story... its Obvious that they genuinely lov an care about each other. .. they BOTH deserve. . Happiness...an LOVE... plz continue... great story line.. wonderful writing. With A lot of trueth in this....

This is a cute story but you moved very quickly so I sometimes got confused. I've second they seem to be in the hospital then they are on the school bleachers. Also the situation doesn't make sense. Why is the main character a senior in high school living by himself. And our rune is rich why is he stripping. You can make those thing mange sense if you give a backstory or something. However it's a good first effort

Nice story do hope you continue as it was going a little fast. His father is such a dick can say from memory that it sucks to be beat with a belt. But it is better than their fists. would like to see where yo plan to take this story . Good work keep it coming. Thanks John

We want more please. A continuation of the story would be nice.