by rumpleminty
That was a great 2nd part, I look forward to seeing what other great ideas for unique scenes you have.
Great story. Once again you bring life to your characters. Loving the story and characters.
5⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Did he forget the he's worth 50 million or did her ring cost more than that?
"For this," he told her, pulling a ring box out of his pocket. Inside was a whopper of a ring, far more than what he could've afforded
So, what happened to the 50 million trust fund?
3 star for loss of continuity.
The problem with unlimited power is the difficulty in coming up with conflicts to keep the story interesting. Will this really be a story or just a framework to string sex scenes together?
Premise of the story has a lot of potential that has gone unrealized.
Not worth reading any further. 2 stars for me.
Yeah, as Anonymous stated below, what happened to all the millions in the family trust that now he can't afford an engagement ring and they have to rip off their credit card company, basically stealing now?
If Laura is going to go on working that whenever one does the other does thing might be a bit inconvenient.