All Comments on 'Unlimited Power Pt. 04'

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FerrumitzalFerrumitzalabout 2 years ago

Honestly, far too much sex, imo. We get it. She's a sex genie and lots of boinking needs to happen. However, it becomes boring and repetitive after awhile, losing any heat it might have. Looking over the last two chapters, it was easy to scroll through 80% of it because it was just more sex like happened in all the other chapters. Nothing new, interesting, exciting... but it did stall the story because there just wasn't any room left in the chapter to talk about anything else.

Bronco56Bronco56about 2 years ago

Omg. Love it. A little short for me but what a cliffhanger. I'm can't wait for the next chapter. 5⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

mharrisonmharrisonabout 2 years ago

Great story really enjoying it and hoping you will continue it further....

Have to agree slightly with some of the comments made by Ferrumitzal below. You have a great opportunity to do so much more with this. Apologies if this is your plan already and you're just working up to it ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Altar!

MarkT63MarkT6310 months ago

Very short chapters...

Big_ben1961Big_ben19612 months ago

to short on pages........feels like its bieing rushed

OgfyOgfy2 months ago

This has gotten to be the shortest chapter I've ever read! And I've seen some small stories and chapters before . My lord! Lol fun story tho. So much missed potential

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